Do young people today make good use of their leisure time? Or do they spend too much times watching television and playing video games, instead of taking part in more productive activities?
Nowadays, majority of youths spend the most fraction of their time on screens. The wide array of streaming services and unlimited video games, have provided plenty of tempting options for young people to engage with during their free time. However spending too much time on these type of hobbies is not very healthy and productive. Below, I will briefly discuss about the downsides of this issue.
As much as having entertainment is important in our life, it can have negative impacts on our social health, if not done properly. For instance, youths who spend significant time on watching TV or playing games, lose their opportunity to socialize with others. Socializing is a learning skill that should be gained through human interactions which subsequently, helps improving our emotional intelligence. Individuals who spent most of their time isolated will not get the chance to practice these skills thus, end up struggling with their relationships in future.
In addition, engaging with these sedentary hobbies is a big distraction to adequate physical movement which can also cause health-related complications in the person's life. Having adequate muscle movements and doing sports is crucial to maintain one's wellbeing. We all have heard shocking news of teenages who have spent long hours playing video games without noticing the time and ended up in the hospital. Therefore, it is important to set a limit on the time duration that they can be on the TV or computer in a day.
In conclusion, doing sedentary leisure activities can be damaging to the youngster's social and physical health. Youngsters should spend a reasonable time socializing with their friends and family and practicing sports for their wellbeing.
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Suggestion: to improve; improve
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27898550725 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86261005673 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.668966977 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246361066693 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850844957512 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570151237583 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155050652738 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416648989783 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.