writing task 1 (graph)

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writing task 1 (graph)

The given bar chart shows the percentages of household items which are used 11years from 1972 to 1983.

It is clear from the chart that, the percentage of all the given items in the chart are increased without any drop in the period of 11 yrs. Telephone, central heating and vacuum cleaner hold the first three positions in the list of highest rise in consumption between 1972 to 1983 and are 35%, 25% respectively. The differences between the first two positions are only 10%, but two and three positions are just nearly half of the first two. After a decade, the use of vacuum cleaners asce...

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 12 9
No. of Words: 244 250
No. of Characters: 1160 900
No. of Different Words: 123 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.952 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.754 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.705 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 80
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.087 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.529 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
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