The charts below show the average temperature for each month and the average monthly rainfall in two cities of china: Beijing and Hong Kong.
Given are the charts, which illustrate monthly climate information in Beijing and Hong Kong, China.
Overall, the amount of rainfall and the temperature in Hong Kong is significantly higher than in Beijing. However, the weather throughout the year in Beijing is much swinger than in Hong Kong.
Staring with 20C in January, the temperature in Hong Kong rises to the peak at 30C in June, remaining the peak for 3 months and it declines gradually to 20C again in December. Whereas there is a dramatic change in Beijing as the figure starts with 0C in January, and rockets to 20C in April. Continuing to reach the top at 30C in June, the temperature of the summer season in Beijing remains 30C until August. Few months later, there is a noticeable decrease by a 20 centigrade difference from August to December.
The precipitation level in Hong Kong is at least 5 times higher than in Beijing. According to the highest rainfall level in Beijing is only 200 mm in July, while the Hong Kong figure reaches to the maximum at 400 mm in June. The period of the wettest season is also longer than in Beijing as it starts from May to September but the rain reason in Beijing happens mainly in July and August.
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the amount of rainfall and the temperature in Hong Kong is significantly higher than in Beijing.
the amount of rainfall and the temperature in Hong Kong is significantly higher than that in Beijing.
the weather throughout the year in Beijing is much swinger than in Hong Kong.
the weather throughout the year in Beijing is much swinger than that in Hong Kong.
The precipitation level in Hong Kong is at least 5 times higher than in Beijing.
The precipitation level in Hong Kong is at least 5 times higher than that in Beijing.
According to the highest rainfall level in Beijing is only 200 mm in July,
According to the highest rainfall level in Beijing, it is only 200 mm in July,
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