More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news They get news about the world through the internet Is this a positive or negative development You should write at least 250 words You should use your own idea knowledge and ex
The aim of this essay is to review the viewpoints related to have many citizens unwanted to recieve news by traditrinal ways such as read newspapers or watch television. Instead of that, they choose the way through internet. For my perspective, that idea have merits more than demerits and the reason will be explained by the following paragraph.
To begin with, Citizens can save some budget for buy newspaper or do not need too much time for watch TV. Instead of watch TV programs on time and newspaper, people can have many time for another work such as hanging out or wash floor but it is still possible to recieve news information through out internet by mobilephone anytime, anywhere. For instance, many nation in the world have been proposing the eliminate of newspaper to save the gorvernment budget, and that money can expenditure for many other things such as education or health care.
Furthermore, when people use internet to get news instead of traditional newspapers, gorvernment also limit the cutting of trees to print newspaper. Hence, more trees will be protect for another meaningful purposes like print textbook, comic for childrens or use to make drawing paper for artist. For example, many opinions are currently saying that cutting trees for print newspaper which are very waste the budget and caused of negative impact on environment.
Taking everything into consideration, the merits are still larger compared with demerits. Therefore, I strongly agree with idea that citizens use internet for get news about the world is better than that of traditional newspapers or watching TV.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... on time and newspaper, people can have many time for another work such as hanging out or...
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Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ll possible to recieve news information through out internet by mobilephone anytime, anywhe...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many nations'.
Suggestion: many nations
...ephone anytime, anywhere. For instance, many nation in the world have been proposing the el...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nation in the world have been proposing the eliminate of newspaper to save the gorvernment bu...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... print textbook, comic for childrens or use to make drawing paper for artist. For e...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e drawing paper for artist. For example, many opinions are currently saying that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12547528517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7107892963 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0302655729 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19510835984 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849019076668 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678531471451 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133951187473 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381542288321 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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