The advancement in technology and science has revolutionized our lives significantly in recent years, therefore, the roles and responsibilities of jobs are also undergoing changes to adapt to new ways of working and living. I believe This phenomenon can stem from several factors and some ways can be implemented to prepare individuals for their future careers.
Firstly, due to the developments in hi-tech machines and artificial intelligence, millions of people have faced the risk of losing their jobs. Workers in numerous factories, in fact, have lost their jobs because of the popularity of robotics which are key in driving economic productivity. Furthermore, society is witnessing the worst wage stagnation in generations, driving people to constantly seek better-paying jobs. As cost increases yet wages do not follow suit, most of the workforce have to struggle to avoid losing their disposable incomes, many people have to take up multiple jobs in order to make ends meet, as a result
However, there are various ways that people can prepare for changes in their workplaces in the future. Firstly, schools should educate children and young people about changing working situations and make them prepared for it. In order to do so, school curriculums should incorporate more computer technology and associated skills. Secondly, it is important to implement universal basic income, which is an equal money given to all citizens of countries every month or year. This would help people keep their jobs and not have to take up temporary work, since they have enough money to buy basic necessities
In conclusion, although there are many changes in the workplace these days, educating people on job skills related to computerized machines and setting a basic income, is the key to avoiding any major problems.
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- Cambridge 15 Test 1 Writing task 1 The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in give Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...rk, since they have enough money to buy basic necessities In conclusion, although there are many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29757785467 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92758512438 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1451183791 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.1 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228505434509 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081974267551 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647811906529 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129916141895 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599794723044 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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