Write about the following topic:
Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
With the increasing of world population, more particularly in certain countries, many people claim that it is becoming more noisy than before. It is true that young pupils love to enjoy times, listen to music loudly, celebrate and do fun togrther that makes noise. It becomes more loud particularly during the night period. Many residents demand that there should be restriction on noise pollution, while some oppose this idea considering that people should have freedom on what they do. I strongly support the idea of restricting noise pollution. The reasons behind my support will be outlined in the below paragraphs.
Noise pollution is one of the three main environmental pollution. It has enormous negative consequences. To begin with, there are many elderly citizens, sick and vulnerable groups in the community. Loud sounds disturb the silence and make the sleeping difficut. Thus keeping the vulnerable people in a more unhealthy environment. Moreover, it is scientifically proved that the noise increases the blood pressure, which can push the cardiovascular patients to a life threatening conditions. Additionally, many office gowers prefer to do home work nowadays. Their concentration might be interrupted due to noise in the surroundings. As a result, they may face challenges in completing their task smoothly. To add up with the above, loudiness in the society creates unfavourable situation for students who aspire for higher grades in the school exams.
However, many people believe that everyone should have their freedom and own choices of what they want to do. Thus, if anyone wants to do certain activities for their own joy, even it creates noise, others should resepct their freedom. Nevertheless, personal freedom cannot be justified if it causes bad impact on others wellbeing.
To conclude, there are numerous downsides of the noise creation that owtweigh the happiness by creating noisy activities. Community should take certain steps to control the noise in the soceity. For instance, creating awareness amoung the young generations. Making some rules to punish those who intentionally create noise, especially during the night time.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...be justified if it causes bad impact on others wellbeing. To conclude, there are nu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44213649852 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91384988991 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611275964392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1299504917 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7391304348 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231503057729 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584449655304 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556785920549 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137132691303 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325759427482 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...be justified if it causes bad impact on others wellbeing. To conclude, there are nu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44213649852 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91384988991 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611275964392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1299504917 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7391304348 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231503057729 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584449655304 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556785920549 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137132691303 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325759427482 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.