Drug abuse is an increasing problem in modern times. Discuss some reasons behind this and suggest ways it can be hindered
Nowadays, It can be seen that our society has a significant issue that the amount of drug usage is abused overwhelmingly. While this is a stringent issue, it can be addressed by broadcasting its negative repercussions in order to broaden people's perception.
The primary reason for drug abuse is that it has been extensively advertised on social media with appealing and mysterious uses, and it is classified as a psychoactive chemical. In this regard, inciting curiosity to try it once, individuals may get addicted and uncontrollable to use this drug. Because of the tremendous requirement, the number of medications consumed is as high as feasible. For example, celebrity scandals involving the use of illegal substances or crimes involving the purchase of large quantities of narcotics are common on the internet, demonstrating that people rely heavily on it.
However, there are remedies to this problem, such as propagating information about its adverse effects on social media or through influencers to raise awareness of the dangers to people's psychological and physical well-being. Governments can convey danger on the internet using cutting-edge technology via platforms such as social media, online newspapers, online television, and so on. As an example, one Korean program depicted a popular celebrity at a young age who was involved in drug use; as a result, he was caught and sentenced to prison, and the most practical thing to do was to lose his entire career. All audiences and the community suffer as a result of this.
In the final analysis, it is apparent that the rise in drug usage is a significant issue with serious consequences; nevertheless, the issue can be remedied by disseminating information about severe consequences through online channels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30496453901 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23725266836 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5821278328 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178143907202 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651956051172 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04622680713 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108957526179 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418788339922 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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