Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done to eradicate this global problems ?
It is widely acknowledged that global warming has been rising constantly daily. In this essay, I will explain some compelling reasons behind this phenomenon, and then suggest some solutions to address this issue.
There are many myriad reasons why the earth is getting warmer than ever before. The most significant of which are greenhouse gases released and the alarming problems of deforestation. With regard to the former, the levels of greenhouse gases released from power plants into the air are rising at alarming rates. This is likely to increase the likelihood of a great amount of carbon dioxide in our atmosphere. As a result, this traps heat in the atmosphere and increases the temperature of the planet. When it comes to the latter, one of the most significant things is that trees help absorb carbon dioxide in the air reducing climate change. However, a number of areas of forests being cut down for different purposes, carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gas effects will continue to rise, contributing to global warming.
Some measures should be taken into consideration to alleviate this problem, associated with using environmentally-friendly energy sources and enacting stricter policies by the governments. In terms of the first point is that individuals should be encouraged to use nuclear or renewable energy instead of fossil fuels, which reduces the environmental implications. As far as the second idea is concerned, stricter punishments should be imposed for illegal logging and forest clearance to make sure that forests are managed and protected. As individuals, we can help the environment to mitigate increasing global temperatures by planting more trees in our gardens or taking part in environmental protection programs such as calling for urgent action on climate change. By taking these actions, this issue will be properly tackled.
In conclusion, while there are numerous convincing arguments for this phenomenon, there are many approaches existing to tackle this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41853035144 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06049610112 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6039578672 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180032946635 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571314399885 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500303327682 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10551171613 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410838467486 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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