You want to rent an apartment you have where you previously stayed. However, there are some problems you have experienced during your last stay that need to tell to your owner
- tell the owner, why do you like the apartment
- what are the problems?
- tell the owner the date details when you want to rent again?
Dear Mr.Sumit,
I am writing you to kindly request to give your apartment again during my next office training period.I am Piraba Nagkeeran who stayed your apartment last year December 10th to 20th period. Your apartment is located the stunning area and feels like home atmosphere moreover elegant design and decoration. In addition, it is located in the metropolitan area which is good for me to access everything. Your apartment has all amenities.
During my last stayed in your place, I had a two problems in your home, first, one was , in the bedroom, there was no bed light. If you put one , that would be helpful for me, no need to fear. another one was the kitchen appliance microwave oven, that did not work at all. It was very difficult to heat in the gas cooker no proper utensils. I hope that you will rectify those two issues during my stay.
This time, I will come with two office teammates, my office training will commence on May 22nd to May 28th so, I will be there on May 21 and leave on May 29th evening. Therefore, it would be very appreciating if you confirm my booking for those days.
I am looking forward to hearing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Piraba
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who stayed your apartment last year December 10th to 20th period.
who stayed your apartment last year from December 10th to 20th.
Your apartment is located the stunning area
Your apartment is located at the stunning area
moreover elegant design and decoration.
moreover with the elegant design and decoration.
I had a two problems in your home
I had two problems in your home
first, one was , in the bedroom, there was no bed light.
first, the one was that in the bedroom there was no bed light.
It was very difficult to heat in the gas cooker no proper utensils.
It was very difficult to heat in the gas cooker without proper utensils.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 213 200
No. of Characters: 927 1000
No. of Different Words: 130 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.82 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.352 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.411 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.673 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4