Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives,looking for a better a job,house,community,or even climate.Which do you prefer:staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons a

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...e and moving from one place to another.In my opinion,it is more preferable to mov...
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...rable to move from one place to another.I feel this way for two reasons,which I w...
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...y in searching for better job prospects.In today’s world of rapid industrializatio...
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...ustrialization and disruptive businesses,sometimes old factories get shut down and new one...
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...new ones spring up in some other places.Also,sometimes there are jobs in other place...
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...ay more than the ones in our place does.As a result,it is necessary that a person ...
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...n the ones in our place does.As a result,it is necessary that a person keeps moving...
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... jobs and brighter prospects for future.For instance,my grandfather was a factory w...
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...er was a factory worker in a small town.During the Great depression,the steel factory,...
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...teel factory,he worked in,got shut down.He had no other option but to migrate to t...
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...city to work in a steel plant out there.In the following years,he kept moving from...
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...l plant out there.In the following years,he kept moving from one city to another, g...
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... a vast array of skills and experiences.He retired as a successful entrepreneur .I...
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...stures and opportunities. Furthermore,moving to places with different climatic condi...
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...ons has a positive impact on our health.People who are born in hot and humid places ca...
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...rious medical conditions like allergies.Moving to a colder place like mountains can of...
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...ne coming form a hot or tropical region.The converse of this can also be true.As I ...
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...n.The converse of this can also be true.As I mentioned before about my grand fath...
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...o be true.As I mentioned before about my grand father moving to a city for bette...
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...efore about my grand father moving to a city for better job prospect.I would lik...
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...fter living for a few months in the city,he felt ill because of all the dust and sm...
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...use of all the dust and smoke out there.His doctor advised him to move to a more s...
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...t and smoke out there.His doctor advised him to move to a more sub urban area.He ...
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...d him to move to a more sub urban area.He took the advice and moved to a suburb n...
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...ice and moved to a suburb near the city.It is necessary for a person to move to pl...
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... order to stay healthy. In conclusion,I strongly believe moving to new places i...
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...ce. This is because moving to new places exposes us to better job prospects and a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.16317016317 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125874125874 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027972027972 0.046263068375 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041958041958 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121212121212 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.04662004662 0.0351676179071 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15424325205 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0652680652681 0.0309702414327 211% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.004662004662 0.00188951952338 247% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0839160839161 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016317016317 0.0209618222197 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00932400932401 0.0139019557991 67% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2585.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 390.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.62820512821 5.86048508987 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348717948718 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235897435897 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169230769231 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133333333333 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15424325205 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541025641026 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 60.879282383 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6684587814 34% => OK
Sentence length: 55.7142857143 20.5533526081 271% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 295.193122535 48.84282405 604% =>OK
Chars per sentence: 369.285714286 120.699889404 306% => OK
Words per sentence: 55.7142857143 20.5533526081 271% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 0.644075263715 266% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.54480286738 757% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.304029304 45.7405998639 173% => OK
Elegance: 1.71 1.45489161554 118% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265294481829 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.201975299444 0.103427244359 195% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.123282535018 0.0752933317313 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.854830148082 0.497263757937 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151508389766 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152244752669 0.114077575197 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103854747146 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350412077773 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.202971649924 0.067059652881 303% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174120875091 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108189063343 0.0618886996521 175% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.

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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30