The table below shows the number of visits to the UK by overseas residents between 1975 and 1998 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the number of visits to the UK by overseas residents between 1975 and 1998.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of visits to the United Kingdom by overseas residents between 1975 and 1998. Overall, the most often visiting the UK were residents of Western Europe, which were counted around 16.8 million in 1996. But then was decreased on some thousands.

By the contrast, the least often visiting were North American residents and other ones, which were numbered around 8.4 million visits in both in the same year.

The most popular activity was leisure, which dominated on over the period ( between 1975 - 1998 ) and had 19.2 million in the best year ( in 1997 ). Another popular activity was the business. The differences between two activities were significant, the leisure was popular in three times almost every year of this period.

However, despite on this, the most popular year of meets to the UK was 1998, when were counted about 26 million visitors.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192771084337 0.268076937826 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.120481927711 0.116061578633 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0722891566265 0.0759168565197 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481927710843 0.0366838410393 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.138554216867 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0361445783133 0.0379272487307 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33464457463 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0120481927711 0.0210936926555 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.132530120482 0.0948980150116 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0240963855422 0.00967000014798 249% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 882.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.9 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91946308725 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335570469799 0.337110787985 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281879194631 0.247514529752 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147651006711 0.171178102325 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0805369127517 0.112407865282 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33464457463 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 48.0180670865 49.3433353143 97% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 18.625 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6082924427 42.9750493124 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 135.714022679 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 46.8129194631 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.17857142857 2.94281807926 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485993916084 0.418131533498 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157672184595 0.181151798455 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109306036619 0.0850326197045 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.712210326911 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.238537950965 0.157042692854 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268416958091 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192700957852 0.108899403657 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.392534019795 0.367819155151 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0499389897149 0.0812612215331 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34914931253 0.316326947829 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109773901634 0.0921553760075 119% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9