"The times they are changin" that is one of the most famous Bob Dylan songs of all time. Some people might fear that change because they like their lives staying all the same. These people are feared of changes and for that they avoid this because it is the easiest way. But there people who live their lives vice versa. They are not afraid of these kinds of changes and they welcomed them. The best way to live your life is to welcome and enjoy changes and looking forward to new experiences and challenges because that helps your personal development makes your social life easier and moves your career a step forward.
First of all, for people changes are essential for the development of their personality and for their growing up. It is important for humans to self-reflect their behavior and their doings and change them if something does not work out the way they want. Another point is that they can grow up by facing new challenges and situations. Moving into a new city, for example, is a very big step and a huge change but it could help your own development. As a stranger in a new city, you have change view and have to leave your comfort zone by meeting new people and discover a new terrain that would definitely make you stronger and more grown up.
Secondly, when it comes to the interaction with other people changes are inevitably and also inescapable. Every day we have to face other, sometimes unknown, people. During our interactions problems might cause up. We have to face these problems and can not run away from them. Sometimes these problems are caused because of our own behavior and habits. When we are stubborn and do not face these problems because we do not want to change things we might end up alone in the worst case scenario. All in all, sometimes it is necessary to change our behavior for our own good and especially for the good of others.
Thirdly, changes and new experiences are unavoidable for the academical and the working career. At university, for example, you often have to change your point of view and open your horizon to move your studies forward. During your studies, you can not run away from changes because your schedule changes every semester and that is a change too, even when it is simplified. Another factor is the work placement where changes are necessary. When your employer sends you to another work placement or even into a new city you do not say categorically "no" because you want to move forward in your career and for that you face the change.
In conclusion, avoiding changes is not the best way to live your life. Changes are required in every part of our lives especially when it comes to building up our own personality, social interactions and moving a step forward in the own career. So welcome new changes and experiences you might be surprised how happy you are by facing them you can not run away from changes anyway because as Bob Dylan already recognized "The times they are changin".
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194539249147 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.156996587031 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0819112627986 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0699658703072 0.046263068375 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10409556314 0.0685040099705 152% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0921501706485 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0255972696246 0.0351676179071 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50646395998 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273037542662 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0102389078498 0.00188951952338 542% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0836177474403 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170648464164 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170648464164 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3008.0 2387.08602151 126% => OK
No of words: 527.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70777988615 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290322580645 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222011385199 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134724857685 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0853889943074 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50646395998 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404174573055 0.524397521467 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.4204783184 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2692307692 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7988399724 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2692307692 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.4703692892 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 0.943298969072 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379087804689 0.300154397459 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112330259392 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651427347822 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481580064533 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119451302262 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135229702523 0.114077575197 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686775406857 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367705886043 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.077295468403 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255960022344 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519059876339 0.0618886996521 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 18 Out of 30