The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
You should write at least 150 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Given are two kinds of figure concerning how much the average family expended on food in four years from 1970 to 2000. The first chart provides information about the spent on restaurant meals (in percentage), while the second one illustrates how many fast food meals and sit-down restaurant meals were in each year.
The most significant point in the pie charts is that between 1970 and 2000 there was a considerable growth from one-fifths in the first year of the period to exactly a half in 2000. That is a rise of forty percent in a thirty-year period.
The most striking feature to comment on in the line chart is that even though both numbers of fast food meals and sit-down meals started at the same point, a mere twenty meals, however had two different endings. In 1980, the number of sit-down suppers rose respectively to approximately thirty five, while the number of quickly served meals experienced a smaller increase. However, in twenty years after that, the proportion quickly reached a peak at relatively ninety, considerably forty meals more than that of sit-down restaurant meals.
It is interesting to note that through more than thirty years, having meals in restaurant whether in fast food or sit-down one has become very popular.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one fifth', 'a fifth', or simply 'fifths'?
Suggestion: one fifth; a fifth; fifths
...00 there was a considerable growth from one fifths in the first year of the period to exac...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240506329114 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.113924050633 0.116061578633 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886075949367 0.0759168565197 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0632911392405 0.0366838410393 173% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0042194092827 0.0131127313244 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.164556962025 0.155750635184 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0253164556962 0.0379272487307 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51776367264 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210970464135 0.0210936926555 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0210970464135 0.00175180941692 1204% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.10970464135 0.0948980150116 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0084388185654 0.00967000014798 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1255.0 1161.00487805 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.9 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75688073394 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298165137615 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197247706422 0.247514529752 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114678899083 0.171178102325 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0871559633028 0.112407865282 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51776367264 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.3061037696 49.3433353143 108% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 27.25 23.0094962315 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8596704633 42.9750493124 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.875 135.714022679 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 23.0094962315 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 46.9747706422 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.37209302326 2.94281807926 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54028719683 0.418131533498 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186990983269 0.181151798455 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0578752936185 0.0850326197045 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.742361130872 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15276675277 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281543703128 0.228904883108 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113445300913 0.108899403657 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311436238228 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0230228152496 0.0812612215331 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354209191438 0.316326947829 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131370381123 0.0921553760075 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9