2 paragraph about advantages and disadvantages living in a small community.
In my opinion, Advantages of small community includes known each other and easy internal transport. Everyone lived in a small region they knew each other very well. So in obstacles neighbours supported each other without doubt. Also, citizens made strong relationships as a consequence of known each other. Easy accessing to every part of area was another advantage. Because the city was small accessibility to other part of region in emergency situation was very fast.
However, there were many disadvantages. Firstly, compare to modern society, such cities were not very important for governments, so they had weak facilities. And they did not have complete information about other parts. And top of that, on situations like earthquake they had many injuries. Secondly, Citizens in small community could not accept new technologies easily. Because they thought these high-tech devices were harmful to youngsters and spoiling their minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ery part of area was another advantage. Because the city was small accessibility to oth...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228915662651 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.126506024096 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.150602409639 0.0946595960268 159% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0903614457831 0.0501214627716 180% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0421686746988 0.0437548338989 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114457831325 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0240963855422 0.0403226058552 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83062395524 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240963855422 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.066265060241 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00602409638554 0.021408717616 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 943.0 1933.35771543 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 146.0 316.048096192 46% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.45890410959 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 4.20517956788 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376712328767 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308219178082 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246575342466 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171232876712 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83062395524 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.037074148 56% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678082191781 0.56093040696 121% => OK
Word variations: 66.3915991601 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 12.1666666667 20.7743622355 59% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7234831973 49.517814964 44% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5833333333 127.492653851 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 20.7743622355 59% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38877755511 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 42.9885844749 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.41860465116 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225560778579 0.332605444948 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0947798715064 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0858039582318 0.0668466124924 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433205208385 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0992177483146 0.148594505496 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844840988363 0.134430193775 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784549166419 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.166936291653 0.324371583561 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0638462369009 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166332528142 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0015797137835 0.058150111329 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 50.5617977528 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 9