During the past centuries, people tended to go to local university whenever they wanted to study a university degree. As the time passed by, however, it is common when people tell you they are going to study abroad. This is not surprising as people believe the quality of higher education provided by foreign countries is in high standard and excellent. In addition, local university might not offer the courses people wish to study. There are indeed advantages and disadvantages that are brought by the choice of people who study abroad.
First and foremost, the advantage of this development i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'apart from', 'as for', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194285714286 0.247107183377 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.19619047619 0.155533422707 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0761904761905 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0647619047619 0.0501214627716 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0647619047619 0.0437548338989 148% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100952380952 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.032380952381 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57202028245 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0571428571429 0.0326793684256 175% => OK
Particles: 0.00190476190476 0.00163938923432 116% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933333333333 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304761904762 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0209523809524 0.011925033212 176% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2796.0 1933.35771543 145% => OK
No of words: 483.0 316.048096192 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78881987578 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.20517956788 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23602484472 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167701863354 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107660455487 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57202028245 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.037074148 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459627329193 0.56093040696 82% => OK
Word variations: 52.1614854898 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 19.32 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1851024479 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.84 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.64 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 42.922484472 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.00584795322 1.69124875643 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474741547915 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135164010642 0.102741220458 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.071371046454 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538898055663 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0941970279088 0.148594505496 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18451931936 0.134430193775 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732117321423 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384111238428 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.058590883612 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325182379428 0.228012699653 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034977505846 0.058150111329 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 10.4468937876 201% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9