Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during workday instead of doing the same job all day long. Are you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the work can be extremely strenuous; people pass more time in their jobs than doing something else. Opinions about what is better for the comfort of workers differ in many ways. Linked with our topic, a first group supports the idea that doing various kinds of work during the workday is more satisfied while a second group feels more comfortable doing the same job all day long. Respecting both preferences, I strongly support the first one because of the reasons I will be stating next.
Firstly, doing different tasks in your workday avoids getting bored with the same routine. It is important for a person feeling drawn with the activities he realizes in his job. Doing the same task all day, most of the time quenches the motivation of the worker making him carry a bored routine. Quitting sometimes is caused by this fact; most of people are always looking for something that fills them and making them feel active.
Secondly, doing different kinds of job helps an individual wide their skills. Today, experience is required in almost every job and having different abilities has a great influence when we want to pick one whether to change or improve economically. On contrary, when we are specialized doing just one task obviously our field of work is narrowed. Besides, today, businesses tend to look for people capable of doing multitasking.
On the other hand, I understand people who prefer doing the same job all day long. In that way they get a complete dominion in what they do. It is true that, because of the features of some individuals, having just one task in their job is the best option, mainly because they do not like to have many responsibilities. Although I honestly think that those kinds of workers are just stopping themselves of growing up and improving in their life.
In short, human being is featured for being curious and they are always looking for improving themselves and meeting their boundaries. I thereby think that doing various kinds of jobs during the workday satisfies the worker more than doing the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feel'?
Suggestion: feel
... is more satisfied while a second group feels more comfortable doing the same job all...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...tting sometimes is caused by this fact; most of people are always looking for something that f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'honestly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'in short', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.1834625323 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.201550387597 0.158761421928 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105943152455 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0568475452196 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0723514211886 0.0685040099705 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136950904393 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.093023255814 0.0351676179071 265% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.53671388914 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0103359173127 0.0309702414327 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00258397932817 0.00188951952338 137% => OK
Determiners: 0.093023255814 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00516795865633 0.0209618222197 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.015503875969 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2070.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 408.028673835 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88068181818 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318181818182 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235795454545 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15625 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105113636364 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53671388914 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539772727273 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.6432229049 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5555555556 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6961536499 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.1351010101 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412827477379 0.300154397459 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0868571234659 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.062206653646 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507823743122 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103477090646 0.151897553556 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145172574507 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885054178423 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279559404959 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0875164870439 0.067059652881 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255453120759 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597045070027 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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