The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant .
The table presents how many people work in 4 sectors in the UK in 2 separated years 1998 and 2006. The data is structured in 5 groups based on age from 18 to 65 years old.
In hotel and catering sector the number of people working increased in almost every group with the exception of the youngest while in the building department every group suffered a decrease over the 8 years period.
In the technology sector there was a massive growth for all ages having in 2006 the biggest amount of employees. For the education sector there is not a big difference between the 2 years ,except for the oldest category which had approximately a 20,000 decline.
The building sector had in 1998 the highest amount of workers from the first age group reaching 112,565, but for others the education sector was the most appealing. In 2006 the technology department scored spectacular numbers for people under 56, and for the rest education remained the most wanted sector.
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- The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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- The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 91
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...working increased in almost every group with the exception of the youngest while in the building depa...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed a decrease over the 8 years period. In the technology sector there was a mas...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...not a big difference between the 2 years ,except for the oldest category which had...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'while', 'except for']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28813559322 0.268076937826 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.0960451977401 0.116061578633 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0734463276836 0.0759168565197 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0282485875706 0.0366838410393 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.16384180791 0.155750635184 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.0379272487307 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54460723805 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00564971751412 0.0210936926555 27% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.158192090395 0.0948980150116 167% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112994350282 0.00967000014798 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 967.0 1161.00487805 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.9 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79041916168 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353293413174 0.337110787985 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233532934132 0.247514529752 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167664670659 0.171178102325 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0958083832335 0.112407865282 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54460723805 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 49.8267973293 49.3433353143 101% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8571428571 23.0094962315 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3867279622 42.9750493124 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.142857143 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 23.0094962315 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 47.2104362703 47.7609492067 99% => OK
Elegance: 3.90909090909 2.94281807926 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58971421769 0.418131533498 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.191606746005 0.181151798455 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693709655738 0.0850326197045 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.80363132259 0.706616315825 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0978885951666 0.157042692854 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.35810697915 0.228904883108 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13306935459 0.108899403657 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423802669867 0.367819155151 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0863089135613 0.0812612215331 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.440653957807 0.316326947829 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761916446993 0.0921553760075 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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