It is proved that, sometimes animals are the best companions for humanbeings.
At present, people are more interested in taking care of pets comparing to the past days.There is some benefits for this trend and some drawbacks as well.This essay examines both sides of the issue.
There are two principle reasons why people like to grow pets as their companions.First one is ,animals are more faithful to their masters .They neither cheat nor do any harm to their masters.For example ,in many occasions pets saved their love ones life in life threatening situations.Another reason is ,the number of living alone people is increased nowadays and people often feel boredom from this.Pets are the best buddies for these kind of people .And they feel comfortable and happy in living with pets rather than human beings.
On the other hand there are some drawbacks for this trend.Firstly, at times pets show their wild behaviours towards the people around it.And the bites or scratches from these animals cause some serious illness to human beings.Secondly,the expenses for pets are too high. A great deal of money requires for the special foods and periodical vaccinations they need. Because of these reasons some people feels that it is quite unnecessary to grow pets .
To conclude, there are some advantages and disadvantages to keeping pets as companions.Therefore, people can take a decision bout his according to their financial status and other facilities in the home.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270588235294 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.152941176471 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101960784314 0.0946595960268 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392156862745 0.0501214627716 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.043137254902 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0352941176471 0.0403226058552 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05937004995 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352941176471 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.105882352941 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00392156862745 0.021408717616 18% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00392156862745 0.011925033212 33% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1570.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5690376569 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317991631799 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238493723849 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171548117155 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133891213389 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05937004995 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 63.5515650547 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0891783567 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 34.1428571429 20.7743622355 164% => OK
Sentence length SD: 150.354818441 49.517814964 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.285714286 127.492653851 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.7743622355 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 0.814263465372 193% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 3.99599198397 751% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.9922295278 49.1944974215 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.86666666667 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354295544902 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146917677714 0.102741220458 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0855926109533 0.0668466124924 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.808957595661 0.534860350844 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.252494018965 0.148594505496 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205027349519 0.134430193775 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695062593859 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26684687605 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0905480862285 0.0638462369009 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237328879412 0.228012699653 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328728600268 0.058150111329 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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