Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
I believe that it is very important to be satisfied with a comfortable living rather than to amass money. This holds true and there are a variety of legends and living examples who have proved this thought right. We live for a short period of time on this earth and our concentration must be in leading a healthy and comfortable life which focuses on immaterial pleasures. In any case, it will not be righteous to spend the major part of our life in becoming billionaires.
First of all, earning lots of money beyond limits causes insecurity. For example, in any state in India,...
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