I think , friendship is a matter of time , its vacillate with time & status . so ,i am disagreeing with that statement that state about old friendship keeping carefully than making new friend . According to an Internet survey, almost 70% of people think that it is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends. I totally disagree with this idea. In my view, the importance of keeping old friends is equal to the importance of making new friends. I have several reasons for this opinion.
The importance of old friends in reducing stress cannot be exaggerated. Older friends have longer relationships with us; therefore, they know us better than new friends. When we encounter obstacles, it is our long-term friends—our old friends—who give us the best suggestions and help us get through our problems. Our new friends sometimes cannot give adequate advice to us because they do not know our situations well enough. We need time to get to know our friends. Last week, I faced the dilemma of whether to accept a promising job offer that would take me to another city. All of my new friends in my current company encouraged me to take the offer because they thought the job had strong future prospects. However, one of my older friends discouraged me from accepting it, as he knew that my mother’s health condition was poor and that she needed someone to take care of her. I think his suggestion was the best suited to me.
In other situations, old friends simply cannot help, and we need new friends to lend a hand. New friends can mean a lot in emergencies. In an accident, for instance, an old friend who is far away from you cannot offer any help. In such situations, new friends often play a crucial role in helping us overcome difficulties. After my cousin was in a car accident, his friends at his new company gave him a lot of help. Without the help of his new friends, I doubt that he would have recovered as well as he did.
I often wonder why some people emphasize the importance of having one kind friend, especially an old friend. Maybe these people are satisfied with the idea that old friends are more important. Ultimately, I think we should develop all kinds of friendships in order to assure that we can get help whenever we have trouble.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'i think', 'as well as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207505518764 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.167770419426 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0905077262693 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573951434879 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.119205298013 0.0685040099705 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112582781457 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0331125827815 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68491002271 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309050772627 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0684326710817 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198675496689 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132450331126 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2290.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 408.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61274509804 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311274509804 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237745098039 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147058823529 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112745098039 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68491002271 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507352941176 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.2059465072 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.290363022 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 40.7745098039 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.02564102564 1.45489161554 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342289751802 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106994076291 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0945520472784 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441759493105 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112654217561 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116989667695 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884539460243 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329109964496 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0804891252711 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231066904071 0.210909579961 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104527239064 0.0618886996521 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 20.0 8.42114695341 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.