People succeed because of their hard work, but some say it is something else that is significant for success. How far do you agree with this statement? Give some reasons from your personal knowledge or experience to support your stance?
One of the most controversial issue that circulates in the society is the degree of success an individual owns. There are people who believe that hard work is the root of all achievements however some people think there are other reasons behind it. Personally, I partially agree to the statement. In this essay, I am going to examine the question from my points of view and give example based on personal experience.
It is generally acknowledged that possessing voluminous amount of wealth and properties depicts an elite status quo in the society. The pursuit of attaining traditional success is when people struggle to work hard because they perceive the fallacy by producing money. For myself, I slightly agree to this statement. Firstly, it is absolutely true that a person’s hard work results to accomplishments. A particularly good example for this is, having a two-story house located in an exclusive village with a luxury car is a dream to anyone.
Secondly, it is also possible to say that success can be measured by a person’s happiness and fulfillment. Success is thrown away frequently in such varied context that we have forgotten the real meaning behind it. It is certain that these possessions could make an individual happy however, these are just things that eventually will be out of hand. Personally, having a good relationship with others and family to me is basically my foundation of success. It serves as my inspiration to work hard to achieve everything.
In conclusion, the height of success cannot be measured by quantity. Happiness and fulfillment goes hand in hand towards attaining the true meaning of being successful.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224832214765 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.174496644295 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771812080537 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0704697986577 0.0501214627716 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0570469798658 0.0437548338989 130% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124161073826 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0503355704698 0.0403226058552 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00836627182 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335570469799 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10067114094 0.0861772015684 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134228187919 0.021408717616 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134228187919 0.011925033212 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1665.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12132352941 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389705882353 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305147058824 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205882352941 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161764705882 0.137316102897 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00836627182 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.9829409088 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.483538078 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.5147058824 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.32222222222 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31127385298 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0596309752768 0.102741220458 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0311329083617 0.0668466124924 47% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50083668183 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110328312518 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121659741051 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469108962222 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330042915284 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0892254315888 0.0638462369009 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195775774664 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922271366425 0.058150111329 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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