Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views about living in apartment tower. While there are several disadvantages in regard to living in such as apartment, I personally believe that pros of those building are deniable.
On the one hand, from the last century demand of housing due to explosion of population is increased. Therefore, apartment tower was a practical solution to solve shortage housing problem. In one block, approximately 50 families live and in most of the case they do not even know each other. They just live in small flat which is surrounded with at least 3 neighbors. Some psychologists believe that living with strangers increase the lack of happiness because there is no social behavior or emotional connection among them. For example, whenever one of residents faces with a problem he could not count on his neighbors to help him it is just like that he lives isolate in faraway island.
On the other hand, tower blocks have wide range of benefits. Firstly, usually they are often located in premium neighborhoods and have easy access to lots of restaurants, shops and other amenities. Secondly, these have 24 hours door guards which means more securities for residents. Thirdly, high technology also implements in those building so living in those flats are more comfortable and convenient than ordinary houses. For example, one of my friend who lives in such as building has access to dry center and local gym that just located in the ground of his apartment. Finally, people who live in this residential towers have a spectacular view to the city.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against living in high rise apartments, but I believe that benefit of living in those building would outweigh the drawbacks.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'at least', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in regard to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254716981132 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.12893081761 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0943396226415 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0566037735849 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408805031447 0.0437548338989 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163522012579 0.122226691241 134% => OK
Participles: 0.0220125786164 0.0403226058552 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75079758791 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220125786164 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660377358491 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0062893081761 0.021408717616 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.011925033212 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1757.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07958477509 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346020761246 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269896193772 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204152249135 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141868512111 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75079758791 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 69.0460820416 60.7387585426 114% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9404103157 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.133333333 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 0.814263465372 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.2562860438 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.94444444444 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308908799165 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0798494562939 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0383012517636 0.0668466124924 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496213854522 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197833160212 0.148594505496 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120549698084 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989394844085 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279120135775 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0601573352988 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253862331506 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885378841128 0.058150111329 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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