Citizens of a nation feel proud if its cultural history is diverse and they feel safe and secure when its military is strong. Art is for the soul and if the soul is not free from fear then art becomes less appealing to the soul.
Rabindranath Tagore, through his poem 'Where the mind is without fear', conveyed his vision for a nation. Investment in defense is important for the stability of a nation. Nations spend a significant portion of their budgets in research and development in developing indigenous technologies, buying state-of-the-art arsenal and aircraft only to be prepared for dealing with anything that threatens the integrity and safety of them. Threats like violation of ceasefire at borders with neighbouring countries and acts of terrorism do not come with a warning and a nation needs to be prepared for such situations.
The rise of extremist terrorist groups like ISIS is a grave concern not for individual nations but for humanity in general. Such terrorist groups acquire a lot of weapons through funding from unknown sources which are forcing governments to remain alert more than ever. For example, survival in Syria is the need of the hour, investment in arts would be the last thing in Syria's government's agenda.
Investment in military should not come at an exclusion of investment in arts. Arts promote tourism which is important for the nation as well both from the economic and cultural point of view.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28515625 0.240241500013 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.125 0.157235817809 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09765625 0.0880659088768 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05859375 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.02734375 0.0444667217837 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.17578125 0.12292977631 143% => OK
Participles: 0.02734375 0.0406280797675 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78574932569 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015625 0.030933414821 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.08203125 0.0997080785238 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0078125 0.0249443105267 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01953125 0.0148568991511 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1437.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 240.0 452.878318584 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9875 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366666666667 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316666666667 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191666666667 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78574932569 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 219.290929204 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.48968727796 120% => OK
Word variations: 59.1721482559 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8181818182 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5163421721 59.4972553346 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 53.4848484848 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.31481481481 1.64882698954 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382220012031 0.391690518653 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137134903284 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0731894901929 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590731867702 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114980187381 0.149214159877 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175502441459 0.161403998019 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962068693588 0.0892212321368 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328197159507 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0213993630413 0.0692045440612 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270434860354 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572928986801 0.0653680567796 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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