how to prepare youth for government,company? by cooperation or by competition?
Here, the way to prepare a youth as a leader of government and any other organization I would rather chose a way of cooperation. No doubt, competition is another way and it have it's own stand. But cooperation is the one that I like to say about.
To achieve any big accomplishment cooperation is necessary. By cooperation people can work together and they gets chance to know each other and excel from other group. By unity people can complete these works that can not be done solely. By coalising people can get lots of point of view and thoughts and that will help to make something innovative. If people are in clique they get extra courage to face any problem. And they can also find better solution in group.
Like in fight of independency of any country there must be big part of activity done by cliques.consider india, people joined and founded few cooperative groups and they fight against english government. Fighting against government is not a work of single person. And there are more than 80% young person as a freedom fighter. They united to accomplish a single goal and they achieved.
In today's world, take any multinational company or ant\y other institute, people used to work in cooperation. Even to invent something now a days scientist of different countries get together and discuss about relavent topics. By solely working of people our world can not reach this apex of technology. All the sports are teaching us a team spirit and team work and that is only achievable by cooperation.
Specially while talking about youngset, they can also be considered as naive because of lack of their experience so by cooperation they can also aggregate their experience and that can help them to govern any big company or even a country. And because of their immaturity they can also take wrong decision and that can be avoided by cooperation.
It is obvious that youngsters like competitions, thrills, challenges. And because of laziness they need some boost of excitement and they do find it from challenges. If they are working in cooperation there can be situation in which few people do nothing and take benefit. That thing can be avoided by competition.
So there are both things working simulteniously, Both have their own importance at their own place. By cooperation we can do unbelievable things and by competition we can raise our individual capabilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d any other organization I would rather chose a way of cooperation. No doubt, competi...
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...oubt, competition is another way and it have its own stand. But cooperation is the o...
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...ation people can work together and they gets chance to know each other and excel fro...
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...hese works that can not be done solely. By coalising people can get lots of point ...
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...will help to make something innovative. If people are in clique they get extra cou...
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...plish a single goal and they achieved. In todays world, take any multinational ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'no doubt', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236902050114 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.161731207289 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0751708428246 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478359908884 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0660592255125 0.0444667217837 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.129840546697 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0273348519362 0.0406280797675 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91486539997 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227790432802 0.030933414821 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660592255125 0.0997080785238 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0410022779043 0.0249443105267 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00683371298405 0.0148568991511 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2403.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 404.0 452.878318584 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94801980198 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324257425743 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237623762376 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170792079208 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131188118812 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91486539997 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492574257426 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 53.8084744885 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.16 23.380412469 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0326814658 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.12 141.124799967 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.16 23.380412469 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.28 0.674092028746 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 39.9223762376 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.42975206612 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21513156907 0.391690518653 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100135073265 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.083943106809 0.077325440228 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507496297373 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153995045857 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759092859426 0.161403998019 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588185026386 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252895781833 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0633632506712 0.0692045440612 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128545477063 0.275328986314 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377266328111 0.0653680567796 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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