Laws should always be not be malleable enough so they can be useful for punishing the culprit. Many good lawyers uses the laws itself in protecting his culprit crime. They take the help of loop holes in law to attack on the victim itself and saving the criminal. So I agree with the claim that laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times and places to some extent. Many times the culprit is exonorated just because the law was flexible to save the guilty.
Firstly, let's discuss why laws should be flexible enough to take account of the circumstances. Many times the victims is wrongly been charged for doing something unlawful for saving their life which help the guilty. Let's take a hypothetical example of a women who is abused by some guy. So women in her defence attacked the guilty guys. But when this criminal are charged for abusing a women. Their talented lawyers of the guily frame the court with the laws in such a way that the victim women is shown as culprit. So the laws should be flexible enough to undertake the self-defence point. Thus I feel that the laws should be flexible which can help correct guilty to be punished.
Secondly, there are times when lawyers can even take the help of flexibility of laws to prevent his guilty client. Many times the victim don't get justice because of lack of evidence or the evidence is proved spurious. Let's take a example in which a culprit does who hit someone with his car and ran away. When the culprit is been charged their lawyers frame the court by proving the evidience to the false. The eye-witness who is testifying against the culprit is confused by questions that make the witness prove wrong. And lawyers uses the flexibility to save the culprit. Thus law should also be stringent to prevent such things.
Thus, to some extent the claim is true and laws should be made flexible to save the victim for doing something wrong and punished the guilty. But the laws should also be stringent enough so that guilty cannot take help of flexibilty to save himself.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'i feel']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234693877551 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.19387755102 0.157235817809 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094387755102 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382653061224 0.0497285424764 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0357142857143 0.0444667217837 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0994897959184 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0535714285714 0.0406280797675 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35296692887 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.030933414821 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117346938776 0.0997080785238 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030612244898 0.0249443105267 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0280612244898 0.0148568991511 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2178.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96712328767 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328767123288 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224657534247 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.117808219178 0.200843997647 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0657534246575 0.132149295362 50% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.35296692887 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416438356164 0.48968727796 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.6172023065 55.4138127331 77% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5909090909 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7462826644 59.4972553346 45% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.674092028746 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.0566625156 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.44761904762 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273971396756 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119043262266 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732990291492 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503283717868 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160698444364 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13449743083 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1385260149 0.0892212321368 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.557146237192 0.385218514788 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0674082879585 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237468206058 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691648724879 0.0653680567796 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.30420353982 245% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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