The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's
efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
The statement suggest that due to technological advancement in the country it should
increase the efficiency of people so by these people will have more leisure time . Now a days
there is an wide increment in the technology so by these people can get somewhat safety related
to it and they can save their time. As increase in technology there will be new Developmnet in the
software, Internet and many all other things.
As we know that in archaic era there were no technology so people were forced to
complete their work by themselves and by these they were not getting not much leisure time to
spend. Due to increase in technological advancement related to finance, software which are
widely used in the market for the competition which the buisnessman and other companies face in
day to day life. So as per author suggets that by increase in technology the benefits which will get
by technology should increase the efficiency of the people. Let's take an example of United States
of America. In ancient time in USA technology was not there so there was not much competition
related to other countries in technology department. But as per now scenario USA is widely
spread in the departmnet of technology. So by these there is an increase in the efficiency of
people.
doctors with their hardwork . But as new technology is available with it's help Doctors are able to
cure and prevent the Diseases which is too Dangerous for the people. So by these advancement
in technology will increase the people's efficeincy and they will get more leisure time to spend.
Due to increase in technology people are able to buy any products which they want by sitting at
home from online with the help of an Internet. Due to these advancement in technology helps
people to save their time and as well as the fuel of the vehicle which there are using.
As advancment in BioTechnology will cure the diseases which were not solve by the
As there in an increase in the computer technology, Expectation of the Employer will be
more from his Company in which he is working because they will think that if they gets the benefit
of new computer technology than they can complete their work too speedily and the can get some
leisure time for them. As there is an adancement in technology there are different software
available for different working material so by these people get more efficiency for doing the work
and complete in less time.
In final I suggest that as there is an increase in the advancement of technology people
should get greater efficiency and gets benefits of new technology which is available in the world.
So by these people will get some more time to spend and can do any other work what they want
to do in their free time.
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
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...ople can get somewhat safety related to it and they can save their time. As inc...
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Suggestion: By
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Suggestion: Spread
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Suggestion: People
... is an increase in the efficiency of people. doctors with their hardwork . But a...
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Suggestion: Doctors
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: In
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Suggestion: Home
...oducts which they want by sitting at home from online with the help of an Interne...
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Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'these advancements'?
Suggestion: this advancement; these advancements
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Suggestion: People
...hese advancement in technology helps people to save their time and as well as the f...
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...f the vehicle which there are using. As advancment in BioTechnology will cure ...
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Suggestion: solved
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Suggestion: Leisure
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Should
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Suggestion: To
...can do any other work what they want to do in their free time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254980079681 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.141434262948 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677290836653 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0517928286853 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0458167330677 0.0444667217837 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.157370517928 0.12292977631 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0258964143426 0.0406280797675 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66829580766 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318725099602 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996015936255 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338645418327 0.0249443105267 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0239043824701 0.0148568991511 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2815.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 482.0 452.878318584 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84024896266 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292531120332 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238589211618 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174273858921 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109958506224 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66829580766 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.342323651452 0.48968727796 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.6102143215 55.4138127331 70% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3684210526 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3991196596 59.4972553346 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.157894737 141.124799967 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3684210526 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.263157894737 0.674092028746 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.94800884956 627% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.2273422145 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.83333333333 1.64882698954 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26658996304 0.391690518653 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142470448366 0.123202303941 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0875440033713 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.778980712175 0.547984918172 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.257037896832 0.149214159877 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138831701372 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859337930614 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.117612258993 0.385218514788 31% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0758755452757 0.0692045440612 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113306421327 0.275328986314 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640816621433 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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