The best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by installing in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The statement which author suggest is definitely true for the young generation to cooperate with the people not to competition. As author tells that young people should accept leadership in industry and many other field .This statement is needed now a days because young people are having better knowledge and they are adroit than the old generation people.
In today's world there is a demand for the young people who can work hard and they have the ability to complete their work as soon as possible. Young people are having good ability to do work and they can have new innovative ideas so by these there is an huge growth in the company and in government. In today's world industry and all government fields required the people who can complete their work in less days so they don't have to suffer any lose due to it. Society should prepare the young generation by giving positive ideas than negative ideas to take part in the leadership of the industry and many other fields. As author says that society should prepare because if they are having an negative ideas in their mind than they will only think that they have to compete with the other fields person so by these they will forget how to cooperate with the person.
In many industries and other fields the employer who are having an experience with them they only think about how to compete with the other industry instead of cooperating and deal together so the world will get new product and they will be happy with it, if industry get young generation people with an positive ideas to lead the industry , government and many other fields so by these there will be huge amount of benefit which will be available to the people of the world and there will be an less competition between the industry and other fields.
Now a days people think that they get the proper service and better product, so by having an positive thinking or innovative ideas they will cooperate with the world so by these there will be created vast difference between the industry who think about competition and other industry who think about how to cooperate with the people of the world.
Firstly we think that if there is an less amount of the cooperation then the company will sometimes fall in the huge loss so they have to shut down their industry from the market. The young generation people who have been prepared that they have to take the leadership for the government and other industry with the cooperation not to take with the competition that they will do to take their industry or field to a first rank.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220556745182 0.25644967241 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.147751605996 0.15541462614 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111349036403 0.0836205057962 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428265524625 0.0520304965353 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.051391862955 0.0272364105082 189% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134903640257 0.125424944231 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0235546038544 0.0416121511921 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.2998337305 2.79052419416 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385438972163 0.026700313972 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00214132762313 0.001811407834 118% => OK
Determiners: 0.109207708779 0.113004496875 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0364025695931 0.0255425247493 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0235546038544 0.0127820249294 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2571.0 2731.13054187 94% => OK
No of words: 454.0 446.07635468 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66299559471 6.12365571057 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.57801047555 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284140969163 0.378187486979 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189427312775 0.287650121315 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132158590308 0.208842608468 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0770925110132 0.135150697306 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2998337305 2.79052419416 82% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 207.018472906 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.323788546256 0.469332199767 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.1663226171 52.1807786196 69% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.039408867 55% => OK
Sentence length: 41.2727272727 23.2022227129 178% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.377669884 57.7814097925 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.727272727 141.986410481 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.2727272727 23.2022227129 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.724660767414 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 3.58251231527 530% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.2154585503 51.9672348444 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.56637168142 1.8405768891 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369229304389 0.441005458295 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.304281035074 0.135418324435 225% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.117769413427 0.0829849096947 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.750925412782 0.58762219726 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147468466393 0.147661913831 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214865713179 0.193483328276 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516138945467 0.0970749176394 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.524934428197 0.42659136922 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750966367683 0.0774707102158 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263878159923 0.312017818177 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589618383634 0.0698173142475 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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