You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment.
Write a letter to the principal of the college explaining your situation and ask for information or other means of financial help available.
Dear Mr. Hogwid,
I am writing this letter to ask for information about any kind of financial assistance your college provide to your students.
My name is Meena and I am anticipating to enroll for the English language course at your college for next year, but due to some unfortunate circumstances, I have found myself in financial crises and not in a position to continue my study.
My secondary education certificates show above average grade and I also used to teach English at night school for adults. I would be grateful if you could provide me with scholarship or any kind of financial assistance which I would repay. My employer is ready to arrange salary certificate and monthly payment to college account number as the installation of a loan.
I think I have all kind of documents required to be eligible for any kind of financial aid. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Meena.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'i think', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254437869822 0.220444632235 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.147928994083 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094674556213 0.0606518309736 156% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0295857988166 0.0506257000042 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10650887574 0.118615021944 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118343195266 0.107062808482 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0355029585799 0.041066498444 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85380173597 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0591715976331 0.0385302599488 154% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0591715976331 0.0714148451538 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177514792899 0.0191574576366 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00591715976331 0.00930345855455 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 923.0 1141.60824742 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.134020619 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87898089172 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350318471338 0.284621296913 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28025477707 0.211203875043 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165605095541 0.133321485273 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12101910828 0.0843313296314 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85380173597 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.622163163488 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.7730785639 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 12.9587628866 62% => OK
Sentence length: 19.625 16.4300151701 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7596146361 44.7399317507 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 90.9928171075 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.4300151701 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 47.650477707 37.5504026743 127% => OK
Elegance: 1.4375 1.13073093955 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39423753333 0.331212695627 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.078485238649 0.0927372745006 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0837506274946 0.0736520305886 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.676233831161 0.579516596996 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.233099202378 0.180689518051 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160441402536 0.122183219658 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886545308361 0.0765303033291 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2415648823 0.211926503985 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0109774482675 0.0737400523855 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260432305013 0.203819188451 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363009911989 0.067151250289 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.