More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause and the possible solutions? (revised)
Cars allow people to get around with ease. The sales of cars in developing countries have increased dramatically. Because it is commonly recognized that cars do contribute to the pollution of air, it became a customary practice to impose heavy taxes on car owners.
As far as I am concerned, a great numbers of cars do pollute the natural environment. The reason for this is that most cars are equipped with the internal combustion engines. While providing cars with a propelling momentum, such engines emit dangerous exhaust fumes into the atmosphere. For instance, research from University of Shanghai in 2014 shows that 90% middle-age people who live in Shanghai, China are no longer in the position to inhale unpolluted air. Since almost all people go to work by car, the air quality gradually declines over time. Therefore, it is agreed that some kind of solution needs to be found to tackle the issue.
One of the possible solutions is to increase taxes on owning cars. Such solution will make people avoid purchasing new cars. For example, research from Nanyang Technological University in 2005 shows that there is about 80% decrease in purchasing new cars in Singapore. The research involved middle-class citizen who have middle-level income This is the direct consequence of the Singaporean government's decision to impose more taxes on car owners. So, Imposing heavy taxes on car owners is excellent solution to overcome the problem.
In conclusion, purchasing automobile in developing countries is becoming increasingly popular. Therefore, the earlier mentioned solution appears to be the most appropriate one.
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- Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create?. What are the possible solutions? (revised) 61
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause and the possible solutions? (revised) 76
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.What problems does this cause ?What do you think are possible solutions? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (China) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...-age people who live in Shanghai, China are no longer in the position to inhale unp...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28125 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.177083333333 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0902777777778 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0451388888889 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0138888888889 0.0437548338989 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145833333333 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0520833333333 0.0403226058552 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92782242021 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381944444444 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0798611111111 0.0861772015684 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00347222222222 0.021408717616 16% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00694444444444 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1630.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29343629344 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393822393822 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.320463320463 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.27027027027 0.203846283523 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169884169884 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92782242021 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.4233204357 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1875 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2356661725 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.2338320463 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.02941176471 1.69124875643 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293658986556 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0778262239388 0.102741220458 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614816842386 0.0668466124924 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482722890099 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115588744957 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116450965894 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532699203603 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351189294184 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0543555116108 0.0638462369009 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199557271354 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310658845253 0.058150111329 53% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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