Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel, but others claim that animals are a necessary part of diet.

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Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel, but others claim that animals are a necessary part of diet.

Well 70% of people are non-vegetarian .And they eat meat in there regular diet.And they love the test and it containts high proteins from the meat. While other prefer to eat vegetarian food.

WE get very high protein in small amount of food from meat.As there is also a different variety of food in meat.
People leaving in the cold area , it becomes necessary for them to have meat to maintain the heat in the body and to sustain over there.Also People leaving in the Sea Area having fish and sea food are there steeple diet.Also there occupations.

While in other case in some religion killing animals is Sin. So its uagainst there religious believes. They prefer vegetarian food.For there regular diet.They find and an alternative of Protein n fat from the pules, seeds , fruits etc.It also keep them health and away from obesity.

While i would like to concluded that its and matter of choice and the environment where people leave . There regular food habits depends on that and also on there upbrinrg and religion beliefs.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278947368421 0.268076937826 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.136842105263 0.116061578633 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0759168565197 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0421052631579 0.0366838410393 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0473684210526 0.0131127313244 361% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136842105263 0.155750635184 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0210526315789 0.0379272487307 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4154530797 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0210936926555 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631578947368 0.0948980150116 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00526315789474 0.00437022459523 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00526315789474 0.00967000014798 54% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1053.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305555555556 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222222222222 0.247514529752 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138888888889 0.171178102325 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.112407865282 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4154530797 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 53.4815607125 49.3433353143 108% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0094962315 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.622342531 42.9750493124 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 135.714022679 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.0094962315 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 1.48048780488 1621% => OK
Readability: 42.2222222222 47.7609492067 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.93023255814 2.94281807926 66% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170987702993 0.418131533498 41% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101532247594 0.181151798455 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0605024253213 0.0850326197045 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.666169397959 0.706616315825 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.261558950545 0.157042692854 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801330536463 0.228904883108 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437499909757 0.108899403657 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219779986929 0.367819155151 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0246328299246 0.0812612215331 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105454016978 0.316326947829 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232792951225 0.0921553760075 25% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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