Undoubtedly, the Internet has revolutionized the communication and takes its place in the individual lives. Many people believe that the use of social network and instant messaging services has a dramatic growth and as a result of that direct connection is fading of the modern lives. In my point of view, network communication absolutely has especial advantages which caused it to be popular; nevertheless, face to face relationships and meeting preserve its own value for people.
The internet rather not to replace with the face to face communication. Meetings and in person conversations contains body languages and emotional expression which are not in text messaging or typed expressions. Moreover, text speeches mainly caused a type of misunderstanding or a lack of comprehension in content. It means that the intonation of the sentences could not be specified and those lead people to misunderstand. Therefore, due to the fact above face to face communication would not be removed from regular life.
On the other hand, the internet has plenty of benefits that make it popular in the people's life especially individuals conversations and communications. The social networks have no time and place limitation, so, people could connect to each other from a long distance whenever they need just by a bunch of clicks. In fact, the distance relationships would not be a dream anymore because of internet and text messaging.
In conclusion, although, many people believe that text messaging communications significantly enhanced that might lead to forgetting direct conversations. In my opinion, Although, social networks have major advantages, face to face connections has other pros which do not exist in the internets such as, body language or emotional expressions.
- Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Which do you prefer use specific reason to develop your essay. 80
- can change human behaviour. Do you agree or not? 89
- Cities are now expanding; the government should make better network for public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership? Agree or Disagree? 77
- Should government build more roads to allow more vehicle owner or improve the network of public transport? 77
- Whether designing of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...of benefits that make it popular in the peoples life especially individuals conversatio...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...because of internet and text messaging. In conclusion, although, many people bel...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ead to forgetting direct conversations. In my opinion, Although, social networks h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294117647059 0.247107183377 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.124183006536 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0915032679739 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0261437908497 0.0437548338989 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0196078431373 0.0403226058552 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.31602154776 2.80594681477 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326797385621 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0882352941176 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016339869281 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016339869281 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1782.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43321299639 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382671480144 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306859205776 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249097472924 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169675090253 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31602154776 2.80594681477 118% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 54.8945589205 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3076923077 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8323927452 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.076923077 127.492653851 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.9936128853 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.09523809524 1.69124875643 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395785073994 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118456029444 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0590135378327 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562119235719 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103486858534 0.148594505496 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185423529612 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107160789043 0.0742795772207 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343935998715 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0919102246453 0.0638462369009 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276783626638 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870533519456 0.058150111329 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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