A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculam untill they enter college.
I do not completely agree with the recommendation of same national curriculam for all students untill they enter the college. Though there are some pros of having a national curriculam, the cons of this implementations can not be ignored altogether.
Having a national curriculam defninetly brings down the disparity among students. Especially students at the age of school going, when gets to follow a curriculam same as all other peers, will definitely connect with them to a great extent. Some times the inferiority complex among the lower level curriculam becomes quiet a huge problem for a large mass. By introducing a common pattern in the curriculam, definitely this issue can be address.
Also, with a common curriculam, the government of a nation can introduce subjects of national interest and prepare the students to be able citizen of nation in the future. With the appendage of some of the great historic event, ancient culture, the common curriculam can become a medium for imbibing patriotism among the young students of the country which will help the nation to build a bright future.
While all these advantages does this recommedation has, there are a lot of disadvatages present in the other side. If a common curriculam gets introduced, there will be monopoly on the subject selection and curriculam structuring. The governement can introduce subjects which are parochial and intended to serve some skewed purposes aligned with the current goverment. This can turn out to be quiet abysmal for the nations future.
Also, when there will be common, curriculam will be introduced, it may not include some of the niche tradition and cultural significances which are limited to some small part of the country and which is required at least for the students of those demography. This way, the students will remain oblivious to their very own culture, tradition and history and in turn can cause the degradation of the same.
Considering all the above pros and cons of the recommendation I can conclude that to a great extent I am not agreeing with it. Even if the recommendation seems to have some tangential arguements in support of it, but the the darkside can be abject and can cause greater harm for both the nation and to the future of the student community.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'at least', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216545012165 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.133819951338 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104622871046 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340632603406 0.0497285424764 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.021897810219 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116788321168 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.036496350365 0.0406280797675 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89253308635 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267639902676 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00486618004866 0.0016655270985 292% => OK
Determiners: 0.165450121655 0.0997080785238 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0413625304136 0.0249443105267 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014598540146 0.0148568991511 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2290.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04221635884 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345646437995 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277044854881 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203166226913 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131926121372 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89253308635 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480211081794 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 50.9723820354 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6875 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.195807722 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.125 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.3919854881 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.94871794872 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37309231881 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128731083784 0.123202303941 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0902131527248 0.077325440228 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.655088069322 0.547984918172 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16043963243 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175727042288 0.161403998019 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102182019385 0.0892212321368 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.442439110308 0.385218514788 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0439910396987 0.0692045440612 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260164188475 0.275328986314 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806138299378 0.0653680567796 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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