Some people believe that corporal punishment will spoil the children. While others believe that, it is the best method of teaching discipline to children. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that corporal punishment will spoil the children. While others believe that, it is the best method of teaching discipline to children. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Presently, it seems that there are many parents are still in favor of using physical punishment to discipline their children. It raises a controversial question if this teaching method is beneficial for the children or not. In this essay, I will explore both sides of this argument and present my own opinion why I agree it partially.

Admittedly, there are several reasons for maintaining corporal punishment. To begin with, for childrens’ better future, it is vital to teach them discipline form their early childhood onwards by using some appropriate methods such as physical punishment. It d...

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