Humans are influence by others during their life. There more this response to others behavior and their influence can change the life way of a person. Students are not exceptional of this rule. In my point of view, friends have more influence in a student in compare with their teachers. Following reasons and examples will prove my approach.
One of the primary reasons is that students spend more time of day with their friends and we know time has an essential role in influence amount. For example, assume one student in school, he or she is with friends during class also in break time and for playing this relation can extend until home.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider, friends usually have same age and they have same perspective to the world and are more match with each other. If consider one child and want him to choose friend or teacher for playing, undoubtedly, he prefer his friend instead of his teacher, because there is tendency between two persons with same age.
What is more, I would say that students feel comfort with their friends because they can perceive each other. For instance, when I was 8 years old, I found a box under school’s yard garden. I preferred to say this secret to my friend and get guidance of her instead of my teachers, because I afraid to say my teacher and I did not know her reaction for my act.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated, we can reach a conclusion that students influence by their friends because having same age, same view to the world and comfort feel with them. As a more, spending more time and sharing more experience with them.
- TPO24-2 60
- Some people think it is an important part of a child s education to go on field trips for example museum other people think a child s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school 85
- TPO 33-1 86
- TPO31-1 80
- University students are often encouraged to study fields in which significant job growth (a large increase in job opportunities) is expected; these fields currently include science, technology, engineering, and math, do you believe students should conside 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...or teacher for playing, undoubtedly, he prefer his friend instead of his teacher, beca...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[1]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'I'm afraid'.
Suggestion: I'm afraid
... of her instead of my teachers, because I afraid to say my teacher and I did not know he...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243076923077 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.135384615385 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0615384615385 0.0866891130778 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0430769230769 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.101538461538 0.0685040099705 148% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.138461538462 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0215384615385 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37674933847 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215384615385 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0615384615385 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215384615385 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00615384615385 0.0139019557991 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1641.0 2387.08602151 69% => OK
No of words: 292.0 408.028673835 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6198630137 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301369863014 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236301369863 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126712328767 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0684931506849 0.112833075102 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37674933847 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506849315068 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.207364987 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8571428571 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0933519378 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.4872798434 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.43956043956 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264289859171 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102041087303 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785588931175 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548019449779 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176431803428 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110531339295 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495995166358 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.222339740156 0.336927656856 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0519537617755 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167503576493 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539468013341 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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