Music is an art form and culture where the medium is sound and silence. There are different types of music pop music, Jazz, classical music (Symphony opera), rock music to name them few. To a certain extent I agree that traditional music of a country is more important than the international music but international music can not be neglected.
We need music to keep ourself mentally and physically healthy. Music accompanies us all throughout our lives. Music is a key to soul. Music is much more important than yoga or medication as it helps people to concentrate and relief their minds. For example, in schools children are taught to sing, for the purpose of enjoyment and learning, music helps to develop language skills.
Traditional music depicts culture, custom and heritage of a country. It reminds people of the past and the lives of the ancestors. Traditional music is peaceful and helps to provide relief to mind from stressful situations. For example: In my friend’s house, their parents play traditional music in the morning, so they work and enjoy the music which help to make a fresh start. On the other hand, international music is catchy and fun. It helps people to know the culture of other nations. International music is trendy and up-to-date. It has variety of instruments and vocal.
To sum up with, its important to introduce traditional music to new generation to keep the music alive at the same time international music is also important as it helps to know the culture and customs of other nations.
- It is compulsory for children to attend school between the age of 5 and 16 Many people are in favor of raising the age at which children must start their schooling to 6 or 7 and the age at which they are allowed to stop to 17 or 18 People of this view bel 89
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. 61
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? 61
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.What do you think are the causes of 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hout our lives. Music is a key to soul. Music is much more important than yoga or med...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263698630137 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.147260273973 0.116061578633 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.119863013699 0.0759168565197 158% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0239726027397 0.0366838410393 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0547945205479 0.0131127313244 418% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0890410958904 0.155750635184 57% => OK
Participles: 0.00684931506849 0.0379272487307 18% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.81403883546 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0547945205479 0.0210936926555 260% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00342465753425 0.00175180941692 195% => OK
Determiners: 0.0684931506849 0.0948980150116 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00342465753425 0.00437022459523 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00684931506849 0.00967000014798 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1534.0 1161.00487805 132% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.9 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92277992278 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73763899035 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312741312741 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243243243243 0.247514529752 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181467181467 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123552123552 0.112407865282 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81403883546 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 54.1090472286 49.3433353143 110% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 8.93414634146 190% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 15.2352941176 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1762001345 42.9750493124 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 135.714022679 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.689975730869 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 39.559618442 47.7609492067 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.59090909091 2.94281807926 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510734052352 0.418131533498 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0718078403782 0.181151798455 40% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0395360753917 0.0850326197045 46% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535522681789 0.706616315825 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158950855285 0.157042692854 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224442604982 0.228904883108 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899283083939 0.108899403657 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.492770712645 0.367819155151 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0483122946718 0.0812612215331 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.393697273752 0.316326947829 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965502672805 0.0921553760075 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70731707317 243% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 3.16585365854 284% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 7.1512195122 196% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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