Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for your future generation?
There is a huge difference in the way life followed by the present generation as compared to the generation above us that is, the generation of our parents. And in my opinion I would definitely like my future generation to live on the principles of their grandparent’s generation. Well there are multiple reasons to justify my opinion.
One of the most important reasons would be the fact that our parent’s generation had respect for money and the money was spent prudently keeping in mind the expenses of the whole house. Besides that, some part of the salary would go in investments or savings. Contrary to this, the present generation is way too reckless with expenses as well as with their imprudent behavior, they fail to realize the repercussions of over-spending. Following the footsteps of their grand-parents will make them realize the harsh realities of life and will make them more cautious with their money. They understood the fact that change is the law of nature and uncertainties could occur anytime, this made them more cautious with their spending.
Another reason would be the quality of managing the time efficiently. As it is rightly said that “Time and tide waits for no man”, our generation has sadly failed to realize this fact. Procrastinating has become a hobby and everything is kept for eleventh hour. Because of this everything that our generation does has led to stress and various other issues in their personal and professional lives. On the other hand, our predecessors valued time and learnt to manage it quiet effectively. They mastered the knack of balancing their personal and professional lives, which in turn made their lives smoother and much easier. In consonance with the above point, I would like my future generation to be disciplined as the generation of their grandparents. This quality was prominent in making them successful with their respective lives.
Concluding my essay and hence justifying my opinion I would like my future generation to follow the footsteps of their grandparents and try to live on the principles which they lived on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'quiets'?
Suggestion: quiets
...ors valued time and learnt to manage it quiet effectively. They mastered the knack of...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220207253886 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.150259067358 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0829015544041 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0414507772021 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0958549222798 0.0685040099705 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124352331606 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0440414507772 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99045811217 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284974093264 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932642487047 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233160621762 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00777202072539 0.0139019557991 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2120.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12716763006 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329479768786 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265895953757 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208092485549 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153179190751 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99045811217 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 52.1811815253 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3529411765 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3477111579 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.705882353 120.699889404 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.644075263715 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.9425365522 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.35135135135 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241202476885 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120845922324 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682375836824 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532412678552 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18504354093 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105728781632 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534762069567 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423552888027 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0539595810371 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17525612945 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371970406663 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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