Our past experience shape the way we look at people and the world around us.
What are some of the experiences that have shaped your outlook and the way you live now?
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Past teaches us a lot on how to shape our future. Indeed, there is a saying which goes "Learn from the past and make up the future". People in this world are life-long learners. Their learning does not stop with passing out of school or earning a Bachelor's or Master's degree. "Experience is the best teacher". That is the sole reason for which, we always prefer to get advice from the experienced elderly who are always erudite in their field of expertise. Our outlook of the world around us changes with each new experience and we ought to modify ourselves in order to acclimatize...
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