Question authority. Only by questioning accepted wisdom can we advance our understanding of the world.
We advance our understanding of the world only by questioning not necessarily true. As a human being, every one has their own level of understanding of the world. There are several ways to advance their level understanding of our world by brainstorming, writing, reading and listening about accepted wisdom. It is personal interest to select the way their wish.
From the ancient days, books plays vital role in educating people. Most of the world scientists evolved by reading the accepted principle written by the farmer and relate to the real world entities. This also gives them different perspective of principle and leads to the invention of new principle. For example,the book titled "Travel to the center of earth" inspired several scientists to understand this world in different way.
Easiest way of understanding things is to visualize its contents. Modern technology world gives us several communication medias like television, mobile, and internet allows us to visualize the topic and dig deeper into it by questioning our self and providing solutions to our self questions. One of my friend who uses mobile application called "BYJUS" to understand the principle of relativity even though he work as a software engineer
Rather than self learning, some people needs guidance to understand accepted wisdom because each person differs in metal ability to interpret things. These people can engage with their friends/siblings to brainstorm on topic, clarify correctness of understanding with real world entities. Some complex accepted wisdom might need class room training.
Questioning ability gives us ways to understand accepted wisdom and advance our level of understanding, but most of the people fail because they were not able to find to solution to those questions.
Finally, I would say questioning is not the only way to understand accepted wisdom and advance our level of understanding, Instead people choose their comfort way such as training, listening, reading and discussing to promote their level of understanding about the accepted wisdom related to the world as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... invention of new principle. For example,the book titled 'Travel to the center ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Easiest'.
Suggestion: The Easiest
...erstand this world in different way. Easiest way of understanding things is to visua...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun communication seems to be countable; consider using: 'several communications'.
Suggestion: several communications
...tents. Modern technology world gives us several communication medias like television, mobile, and int...
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Line 11, column 205, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discussing promoting'.
Suggestion: discussing promoting
...uch as training, listening, reading and discussing to promote their level of understanding about the ...
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Line 11, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wisdom related to the world as a whole.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279569892473 0.240241500013 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.163978494624 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0806451612903 0.0880659088768 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0268817204301 0.0497285424764 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0672043010753 0.0444667217837 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10752688172 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0618279569892 0.0406280797675 152% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10014070003 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0537634408602 0.030933414821 174% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0752688172043 0.0997080785238 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00806451612903 0.0249443105267 32% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00268817204301 0.0148568991511 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2136.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 330.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47272727273 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409090909091 0.366273622748 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315151515152 0.280924506359 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227272727273 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.175757575758 0.132149295362 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10014070003 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 56.3480901156 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.7724430957 59.4972553346 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.674092028746 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 53.5151515152 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.73958333333 1.64882698954 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400593280553 0.391690518653 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114252623991 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0901874672415 0.077325440228 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.602014216557 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191414573593 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179731910832 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134171232657 0.0892212321368 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310589803854 0.385218514788 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0921104574443 0.0692045440612 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256854881522 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109109556805 0.0653680567796 167% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.