The idea of building a new factory in my community arouses a lot of controversary among different people.Some people contend that building a new factory in their community is destructive plan as it will bring alot of pollution and noises to the residents . However,as far as I am concerned , I completely agree with this plan for two important reasons.First ,it will improve the living standard of local residents.Second, it will bring prosperity to the community.
First of all, it will improve the living standard of people as it will employ alot of people .As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly.Everyone will find job in the factory in all fields from the construction to the production process.As the income increase , people will be able to spend more money in food,clothes,and leisure.In addition , they will have better education, easier health access , and prosperous life style.Thus, the quality of life will be improved tremendusly .As you can see, building a new factory has a possitive effect on people's life.
Second reason, setting up a new factory will bring prosperity to the community .The tax collected from factory is a good revenue to our town. They can use this money to improve the infrastructure of the town as they can improve the hospitals, the education institutes , and the public transportation. Moreover, more houses and shops will be constructed to accomodate the the large number of people who will inhabit in our town.This will make our life much more convient and easier . This clearly demonstrates the importance of building a new factory in our community.
However, i have to admit that building a new factory has a negative consequences in our life. It will create alot of noises and pollution.The quality of air and water will drop drastically.But the positive effects os building new factory far outweigh the negative effects.
To put it in a nutshell, building new factory not only improve the standard of people living; but also , it will bring prosperity to our community.We should all encourage the idea of building new factory
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Essay evaluation report
is destructive plan
is a destructive plan
Second reason, setting up a new factory will bring prosperity
Second, setting up a new factory will bring prosperity
Sentence: Moreover, more houses and shops will be constructed to accomodate the the large number of people who will inhabit in our town.This will make our life much more convient and easier .
Description: The token the is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to the and the
Sentence: The idea of building a new factory in my community arouses a lot of controversary among different people.Some people contend that building a new factory in their community is destructive plan as it will bring alot of pollution and noises to the residents .
Error: controversary Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: First of all, it will improve the living standard of people as it will employ alot of people .As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly.Everyone will find job in the factory in all fields from the construction to the production process.As the income increase , people will be able to spend more money in food,clothes,and leisure.In addition , they will have better education, easier health access , and prosperous life style.Thus, the quality of life will be improved
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: tremendusly .As you can see, building a new factory has a possitive effect on people's life.
Error: possitive Suggestion: positive
Error: tremendusly Suggestion: tremendously
Sentence: Moreover, more houses and shops will be constructed to accomodate the the large number of people who will inhabit in our town.This will make our life much more convient and easier .
Error: convient Suggestion: convent
Error: accomodate Suggestion: accommodate
Sentence: It will create alot of noises and pollution.The quality of air and water will drop drastically.But the positive effects os building new factory far outweigh the negative effects.
Error: os Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
You got a lower mark because of the the wrong format. Don't put a space before punctuation marks. Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 356 350
No. of Characters: 1698 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.77 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.755 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.371 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.459 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.688 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...roduction process.As the income increase , people will be able to spend more money...
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...ity of life will be improved tremendusly .As you can see, building a new factory h...
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... of people who will inhabit in our town.This will make our life much more convient a...
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...e our life much more convient and easier . This clearly demonstrates the importanc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252659574468 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.151595744681 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904255319149 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398936170213 0.046263068375 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0585106382979 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0984042553191 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0398936170213 0.0351676179071 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.24073058027 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292553191489 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00265957446809 0.00188951952338 141% => OK
Determiners: 0.109042553191 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0558510638298 0.0209618222197 266% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00265957446809 0.0139019557991 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2105.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01428571429 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205714285714 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145714285714 0.112833075102 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24073058027 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468571428571 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.1365410418 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6684587814 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5533526081 170% => OK
Sentence length SD: 133.706432156 48.84282405 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.5 120.699889404 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.5533526081 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.644075263715 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.54480286738 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.5714285714 45.7405998639 139% => OK
Elegance: 1.56382978723 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144041117609 0.300154397459 48% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195511364767 0.103427244359 189% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0532800486804 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.726428840905 0.497263757937 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174915315585 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999244688196 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531141446443 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454457835835 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0586574655667 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120330143861 0.210909579961 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346381322487 0.0618886996521 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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