Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
People in every century try to study in best place. Five or six century ago, people went to Atten, because some of the most famous scientist lived there such as Soghrat. This process even continue until now. Today, students who live around the world have a big opportunity to study in the best universities. Most of the times, students have to live in another countries.
I agree with this idea that studying in foreign country have both good and bad side. I have some reason for that. First of all, when we study in different country, we have to learn some foreign languages such as English, French and so on. Moreover, we can learn a lot of thing about foreign country such as culture, local festivals, customs, food. Finally, we can study in the best university in the world, we access to newest technology, information, researcher that happen in the world. It means that after we graduated we have more knowledge than student who study in home country.
On other hand, there is some negative points here. Firstly, we will home sick and miss our family. Secondly, we are alone and we must do everything by self there is no help. Finally, student might be after graduated never come back to their country. Consequently, their home countries lost a expert workforce.
To sum up, I believe, the disadvantages of studying in aboard is temporary. This kind of disadvantages after a short time will disappear. Maybe we can ignore it, because the benefit of it is very great.
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