You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:
• describe the work you have been doing
• explain why you can no longer do this work
• recommend another person who is interested in the work.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to inform you that I’m no longer available to help the staff in your hospital. I’ve been working for six months there. My occasion was to register every patient entering the hospital. But sorry to say, there is no opportunity for me to keep on helping you.
As you know, I’ve been busy on the part-time job position in the local supermarket. I’ve been working as a cashier since I eighteen. The matter is that general manager of the supermarket has recently proposed me to the entire department in his shop. Sorry to say, I will be caught up with my new job more than I used to.
However, I’m happy to inform you that I’ve already found a candidate for my replacement. It’s the close friend of mine Andrew. He is quite benevolent and outgoing person. Moreover, he is currently studying in Medical University, so it’s a great opportunity for him to start his practice right now. I left him you working number, he will get in touch with you within this week.
I want to thank you for the job opportunity you gave me and I hope you’ll get along with your new volunteer.
Your sincerely,
James Gordon.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.167910447761 0.220444632235 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.164179104478 0.167888034529 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0522388059701 0.0606518309736 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0410447761194 0.0506257000042 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.149253731343 0.118615021944 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100746268657 0.107062808482 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0485074626866 0.041066498444 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70394574062 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0410447761194 0.0385302599488 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00373134328358 0.00132118243153 282% => OK
Determiners: 0.0597014925373 0.0714148451538 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00746268656716 0.0191574576366 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1185.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.134020619 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80882352941 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313725490196 0.284621296913 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264705882353 0.211203875043 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191176470588 0.133321485273 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127450980392 0.0843313296314 151% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70394574062 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.5199730939 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4474775456 44.7399317507 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 90.9928171075 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.613754768223 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 40.0705882353 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 0.894736842105 1.13073093955 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346296580531 0.331212695627 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0881665256197 0.0927372745006 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0764354951853 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502414296523 0.579516596996 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18561296264 0.180689518051 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126264233578 0.122183219658 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716164787887 0.0765303033291 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293868769407 0.211926503985 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0478774052674 0.0737400523855 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245237851486 0.203819188451 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417868228947 0.067151250289 62% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.