Population is on rise in most parts of the world specially in countries which are under the phase of development. This has increased inflow of people from rural to urban areas. This has led to several immediate problems.
First and foremost, the infrastructure and resources in urban areas are limited which put pressure on existing system. The residential area's are becoming choked due to rise in new number of buildings. This has directly impacted the use of water and electricity in a locality which are becoming scarce.
Secondly, due to more and more people turning to cities, traffic increases as each and every household has one or more vehicles in their house. This results in utter chaos in the peak hours which leads to chronic air pollution. Ultimately, it causes various types of health concerns.
To tackle such problems, concrete steps should be taken. In an individual's capacity, one should try to pool a car or use public transport for moving in and out. At the government level, an odd-even formula can be litigated to ensure private vehicles bearing odd and even numbers ran on a particular day. Also certain taxes are needed to be imposed upon so that water and electricity are used efficiently and in a judicious manner.
To conclude, i must say this menace should be controlled at the earliest so that our future generations do not have to face the burnt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
..., concrete steps should be taken. In an individuals capacity, one should try to pool a car ...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d even numbers ran on a particular day. Also certain taxes are needed to be imposed ...
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Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a judicious manner" with adverb for "judicious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd electricity are used efficiently and in a judicious manner. To conclude, i must say this menace...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in a judicious manner. To conclude, i must say this menace should be controll...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24513618677 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.182879377432 0.155533422707 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0972762645914 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428015564202 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.011673151751 0.0437548338989 27% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.11673151751 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0583657587549 0.0403226058552 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70788797977 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466926070039 0.0326793684256 143% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0856031128405 0.0861772015684 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194552529183 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155642023346 0.011925033212 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1385.0 1933.35771543 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 316.048096192 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89361702128 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353191489362 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259574468085 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187234042553 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136170212766 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70788797977 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 69.0866690982 60.7387585426 114% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7857142857 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8752279421 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.357142857143 0.814263465372 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 42.7431610942 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.77049180328 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263194667431 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.083095491971 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645207871433 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562962707636 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171616356293 0.148594505496 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107408774527 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563262005849 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260743900318 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0679830746723 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150186503286 0.228012699653 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530987068078 0.058150111329 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.