In spite of the advantages that people had in the past, I believe that people now are more joyful. Someone may consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The reasons go as follows.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: However, still I affirm the delightfulness of the today living.
Error: delightfulness Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 376 350
No. of Characters: 1874 1500
No. of Different Words: 235 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.403 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.984 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.748 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.942 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.512 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Very Thanks to Bigtest Team!
Very Thanks to Bigtest Team!
What do I need to do to get 30 in 30 ??? What are my writing flaws?
There are no great difference
There are no great difference between 28 to 30. and no big flaws found in this essay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big money'.
Suggestion: big money
...d a terrific time. Secondly, making a big money is another noticeable support. These da...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289411764706 0.229887763892 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.124705882353 0.158761421928 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0964705882353 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0447058823529 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0117647058824 0.0685040099705 17% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0941176470588 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0329411764706 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8550305844 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352941176471 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0870588235294 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117647058824 0.0209618222197 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0164705882353 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2319.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 376.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16755319149 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364361702128 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279255319149 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199468085106 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13829787234 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8550305844 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524397521467 119% => OK
Word variations: 77.7350973889 59.2087087015 131% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7894736842 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0790974087 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.052631579 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05263157895 0.644075263715 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.7150055991 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.2987012987 1.45489161554 158% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354646542288 0.300154397459 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0593406315639 0.103427244359 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0504816760193 0.0752933317313 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528250968257 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142970928039 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131625893443 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572766441351 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266603582488 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0677883668638 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220355699306 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681541233769 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.