The average American work five days a week, we are long used to the social norms” eight-hour labor, eight-hour recreation, and eight-hour rest” however, it has little to do with efficiency and productivity. From my perspective, it is more enjoyable to have a job where I work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where I work five days a week for shorter hours due to the consistency, having more time to spend with my friend, and saving money
In the first place, consistency in our work is important for our company. I am the kind of person who likes to finish tasks as soon as possible. I prefer to work for long hours to finish my job in only three days rather than delay so long. Finishing my job in successive time makes me concentrate on my assignment and it's more productive than an inconstant period's work. So I'm fond of the way to work in few days for long hours. It remind me of the most famous person” Henry Ford” who took radical step doubling his workers’ pay, extend the hour of the shift from 9 am to 8 pm and reduce work days to three days, he got criticized by associated of manufacture, however, his competitors saw ford’s business boomed, they adapted the same hourly rate.
Furthermore, working only three days a week for long hours would save me considerable time. I’ll spare four days a week to do many other things. For example, I can find another this kind of job so that I can earn more money to pay for my tuition, which is a big amount of money. And if I had more money available, I could rent a better house to improve my living standard level. Moreover, I will have some free time to do something I really like, such as cooking with my mother and going the theaters to see a film with my friends, which is very interesting and makes me relaxed.” A man should not neglect his family for business” Henry Walt said
Last but not least, working five days a week for shorter hours will spend us more money and time on the transportation. We have to get up early five days in a week and take the bus or subway to the company. As we all know, waiting for subway or bus consumes a lot of time. And we'll have more chance to be late for the job than those who work only three days.
As I elaborated above, I think it benefits us a lot to have a job where I work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where I work five days a week for shorter hours since working three days only helps in the development of the work and keep up with the fast- pace of our society development, and it helps the people to relieve their stress that they are experienced at work because they will have enough time to hung out.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2106 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.097 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.3 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.113 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.543 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.176 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The average American work five days a we...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...end with my friend, and saving money In the first place, consistency in our w...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'period'?
Suggestion: period
... its more productive than an inconstant periods work. So Im fond of the way to work in ...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ive than an inconstant periods work. So Im fond of the way to work in few days for...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reminds'?
Suggestion: reminds
... to work in few days for long hours. It remind me of the most famous person' Henr...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., they adapted the same hourly rate. Furthermore, working only three days a w...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y for business' Henry Walt said Last but not least, working five days a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...than those who work only three days. As I elaborated above, I think it benefi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i think', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231034482759 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.144827586207 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0810344827586 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0465517241379 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0862068965517 0.0685040099705 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103448275862 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0258620689655 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57869059479 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0413793103448 0.0309702414327 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0051724137931 0.00188951952338 274% => OK
Determiners: 0.0741379310345 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137931034483 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155172413793 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2747.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 511.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37573385519 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.217221135029 0.338922669872 64% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.150684931507 0.251872472559 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109589041096 0.174417080927 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0821917808219 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57869059479 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.9577013077 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 31.9375 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.969167017 48.84282405 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.6875 120.699889404 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9375 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 47.0059931507 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.29813664596 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475208676391 0.300154397459 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120039026863 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0854477103131 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528255429238 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180924575844 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205070744771 0.114077575197 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13859010847 0.0781384742642 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390477704219 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.061115716773 0.067059652881 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35668718496 0.210909579961 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968000107647 0.0618886996521 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.