I am writing this letter to let you know about purchase i made through your website. I have bought a mobile phone via order number 3456789 from your company. I was very thrilled to buy such a wonderful gadget at competitive price but on getting the product i was stunned with the cheap quality and worst packing.
To my surprise the warranty seal of the package is opened and the box is pilfered. Some valuable accessories like headphone are missing. Moreover, the screen of the phone is cracked. I am very disappointed with my experience of buying online. In addition to this it was urgently requ...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s letter to let you know about purchase i made through your website. I have bough...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...order number 3456789 from your company. I was very thrilled to buy such a wonderf...
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Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...titive price but on getting the product i was stunned with the cheap quality and ...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... this it was urgently required by me so i had to buy it from local market. Now...
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Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...had to buy it from local market. Now i want you to refund my money at the earl...
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Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... request and process the claim fast nor i will file a consumer case.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210526315789 0.268076937826 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.210526315789 0.116061578633 181% => Less verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.0760233918129 0.0759168565197 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409356725146 0.0366838410393 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.093567251462 0.0131127313244 714% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.155750635184 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0701754385965 0.0379272487307 185% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.64859785668 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350877192982 0.0210936926555 166% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.0948980150116 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00584795321637 0.00437022459523 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 891.0 1161.00487805 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.9 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60377358491 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345911949686 0.337110787985 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25786163522 0.247514529752 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163522012579 0.171178102325 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0691823899371 0.112407865282 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64859785668 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.546246751206 122% => OK
Word variations: 65.870632714 49.3433353143 133% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4545454545 23.0094962315 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2212986967 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 135.714022679 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 23.0094962315 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.689975730869 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 40.2407089766 47.7609492067 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.13559322034 2.94281807926 39% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327652418027 0.418131533498 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0430410788424 0.181151798455 24% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0519926986141 0.0850326197045 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44563336601 0.706616315825 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132092753399 0.157042692854 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113736550174 0.228904883108 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648277394153 0.108899403657 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.186893930455 0.367819155151 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.026888555136 0.0812612215331 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215416146937 0.316326947829 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309136162535 0.0921553760075 34% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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