As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Since the dawn of humanity, humankind has always been concerned with coming up with a solution to his or her problems. From the cavemen rubbing part of wood together in order to make the fire to today's craving for finding a solution for AIDS. The issue of the influence of technology on a human being, which it’s rate has been really high in the last century, is a twofold and a contentious one. From my viewpoint, I agree to a large extent that the technology has had a negative impact on human beings, either mentally or physically, but it should be stated that there are some situations in which
For supporting example, it should be enumerated that technology has definitely made us even lazier than before. In the past, we used to wield our brain solve a mathematical problem, as our fathers did. But nowadays, we are using the calculator to bypass the hardship, and get to the point in a diminutive time. Thus, a brain, exactly like a mangle, deteriorate for an efficient function. Another example would be that in the past we used to use our body power for commuting and traverse of loads. Therefore, we had a stronger body due to the compulsion of the fact that we had to take on the burden on our shoulders and no alternative was left. This even made us smarter and bright.
An even more striking example is the children of nowadays, who are adhered to their tablets and smartphones. Due to the fact that the world wide web is accessible everywhere and anywhere, sometimes even without any restriction, has made our people and children less outgoing and sociable. In the Unite States, based on statistics, the proportion of obese people is really high and only in the last three decades it has risen to such an extent. Technology is by all means playing a destructible role in our world which consequences are sometimes long lasting, and hard to recuperate. Not to mention the mere fact that
Some may argue that the advances in technology have had positive impacts on our lives. It could be said that at olden times, people used horses and donkeys to traverse and commute from one point to another. Furthermore, with the advances in technology, we have been able to come up with Motor vehicles, which are able to save time and energy. It is actually true that technology had made our life comfortable and easy to live. But the truth is, our attitude toward everything in life makes an enormous change in how we perceive it. Not everyone is able to “Use it well”, as the old proverb in Harry Potter and the philosopher’s stone says. A knife could be made for both strangling a human being and cutting a delicious fruit like cucumber.
In conclusion, the opinion that advances in technology results in deterioration in thinking of ourselves is agreed to a large extent due to the reason that technology has made us lazier, facing difficulties and hardships in our lives and the fact that it has made the people of earth notorious for being less active than older times. In hopes that one might understand the consequences of this issue and implement a good solution for not getting involved in it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211382113821 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.160975609756 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731707317073 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0520325203252 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0585365853659 0.0444667217837 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123577235772 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0552845528455 0.0406280797675 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74213992879 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373983739837 0.030933414821 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00325203252033 0.0016655270985 195% => OK
Determiners: 0.10406504065 0.0997080785238 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113821138211 0.0249443105267 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130081300813 0.0148568991511 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3131.0 2732.02544248 115% => OK
No of words: 549.0 452.878318584 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70309653916 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296903460838 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23679417122 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176684881603 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123861566485 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74213992879 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 219.290929204 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500910746812 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.6583854166 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8695652174 23.380412469 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3641826271 59.4972553346 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.130434783 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8695652174 23.380412469 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 47.5489823394 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.4371257485 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332715148929 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0899793381274 0.123202303941 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597664345986 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495297701447 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1618178088 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131559126657 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521575612974 0.0892212321368 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.431757786849 0.385218514788 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0274186729752 0.0692045440612 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234770592348 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033425968993 0.0653680567796 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.