Last week, I traveled from Delhi to Mumbai in your spice jet airplane. On visiting the destination, while waiting to collect my suitcase at the luggage counter I found it missing. I was surprised as I have never encountered such problem. On checking with officials they assure me that my suitcase is safe and might be lost in transit. They told me to go home as they will inform me on recovering it. It is over a week now and I have not heard anything from you. I am again describing the details of the briefcase so that you can expedite your search.
The item which is lost is a handheld bag which opens with a combinational lock. I work with a multinational company and that bag contains some important and confidential details of our company's coming projects. So, it is an absolute necessary for me.
Now, what I want from your side is to know why such delay is happening? In this matter, I have also filed a F.I.R with a local police station. I never expected such a hopeless search from a renowned airline. On receiving this letter I believe you will certainly respond at the earliest and will let me know about your further action. I am also enclosing a copy of this to the local newspaper so that they should also know about irresponsible behavior.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ning? In this matter, I have also filed a F.I.R with a local police station. I ne...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: R
...In this matter, I have also filed a F.I.R with a local police station. I never ex...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...sible behavior. I am looking forward to hear from you.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'look', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.166666666667 0.268076937826 62% => OK
Verbs: 0.201550387597 0.116061578633 174% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0697674418605 0.0759168565197 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.0366838410393 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.143410852713 0.0131127313244 1094% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127906976744 0.155750635184 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0658914728682 0.0379272487307 174% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66939586879 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0232558139535 0.0210936926555 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0813953488372 0.0948980150116 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.00437022459523 532% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015503875969 0.00967000014798 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1304.0 1161.00487805 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.9 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50210970464 5.90752243213 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.270042194093 0.337110787985 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236286919831 0.247514529752 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172995780591 0.171178102325 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0886075949367 0.112407865282 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66939586879 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 59.4905483796 49.3433353143 121% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 8.93414634146 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8125 23.0094962315 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3438035714 42.9750493124 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 135.714022679 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 23.0094962315 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 38.4411919831 47.7609492067 80% => OK
Elegance: 0.920792079208 2.94281807926 31% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335370748468 0.418131533498 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0571555579265 0.181151798455 32% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621947060988 0.0850326197045 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439311187481 0.706616315825 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176606784776 0.157042692854 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104095180339 0.228904883108 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499559106574 0.108899403657 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.149212341884 0.367819155151 41% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0291331788188 0.0812612215331 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185759306133 0.316326947829 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856051293464 0.0921553760075 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.