some people prefer to play team sports, while others prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why.

Submitted by Lauren on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 14:35

In general, practicing sports is indeed a marvelous exploit, by which a person would have the momentum to ensure a well shaped body, a good health and mood. Some people prefer to play team sports, while others prefer to play individual sports. Both cases have their own advantages.

First of all, people who are involved in team sports could always create family like relationships within members of the team. They tend to stand for each other, care about each other and spend a lot of hours together, wether during practice time or during other pertained team social activities. For example; it is...

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Sentence: Others prefer to play individual sports where they could show a virtual individual talents, in addition to having the optitude to practice at their own convenience.
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