I certainly believe that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. So many things have changed and evolved to promote an absolute better life on different aspects.
First of all, health wise, medical services and accomplishments today have promply evolved to a greater extent. Longevity of human beings is a virtual evidence. Now a days people could overcome so many deseases that were considered fatal, at the time when our grandparents were still children. New medicines as well as medicinal equipments were invented since then. Therefore magnifice...
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