Consumption of world's resources is increasing at an alarming rate such as water and oil. What are causes behind and possible solutions in this regard.
There is no even a shadow of doubt that natural resources such as oil and water are important part of our life and no one can imagine their life without it. But, consumption of these resources is increasing at an alarming rate. In this essay, I will discuss what are the reasons behind this phenomenon and I will suggest some possible solutions to overcome this problem before giving any conclusion.
There are ample causes behind consumption of world's resources. But, the most important which we can take into account is population. Nowadays, population is increasing day by day and to complete their desires people consume resources in excess amount. Therefore, natural resources ate decreasing with the passage of time. Next to it, some people think these resources are not expensive such ad water. Thereby, they use water out of limit without thinking. Even they know that one day it will be finished.
Although, this problem have become headache for government . but, it is not insurmountable. Government and concerned authorities can take suitable steps. First of all, government should impose hard and fast rules such as the person who use natural resources out of limit then huge fine should be imposed because after that people will use it in right way. Moreover, government should impose rules to reduce population such as, one parent can take only one child if they will take more children then they will have to pay taxes, apart from this concerned authorities must be given resources according cans.
To conclude, according to my point of view, if suitable steps will not be taken into account then one day valuable resources will be finished and then nothing will be lift for next generation. Therefore, government and concerned authorities should take possible steps to tackle this problem.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'apart from', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247734138973 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.163141993958 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0845921450151 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0453172205438 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0483383685801 0.0437548338989 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105740181269 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0422960725076 0.0403226058552 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62782200404 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02416918429 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0664652567976 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0543806646526 0.021408717616 254% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00906344410876 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1811.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05685618729 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351170568562 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264214046823 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197324414716 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153846153846 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62782200404 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.7704497354 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5882352941 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.556770065 49.517814964 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 44.0096399764 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.54117647059 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345500665752 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0747748063513 0.102741220458 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080008699366 0.0668466124924 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.428600313015 0.534860350844 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172651721748 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120146485146 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967090746649 0.0742795772207 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343340226488 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0535904620666 0.0638462369009 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241374529144 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154382993894 0.058150111329 265% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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